Sunday, June 11, 2017

The Outward Movement (Short - 6 pgs)


So a little backstory..Penned a script under the same name over a year ago and got up to halfway through shooting until we had a few actors drop out and we had to terminate the project. I've always really liked the idea however, and at my age perhaps the financing/scale of the original feature was too much.There was a scene in it very much-like this script that I felt I could make a short on its own with enough exposition. So tonight I went ahead and gave it a shot.It is incredibly likely I shoot this later in the year hence why I'm begging from some criticism and improvements.I have a few issues with it, but I would rather not bring those up just yet in-case someone else shares the same opinion so I can confirm that it's not just me being overly cynical.A pioneer in successful artificial intelligence confesses to a priest.http://ift.tt/2r8JHU2 via /r/Screenwriting http://ift.tt/2ssaiiT

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